After some audience feedback I realised that the audience feel as though my film is more of a music video than a short film. To address this issue I have decided that I will use a voive over to tie all the narratives together.
Here is the first draft of the voice over.
Is it the love of reading a book? Is it the love of a cold ice-cream on a hot summers day? Is it the touch of someone’s hand in yours? Is it your first school crush? Your first love? Passing notes and holding hands down corridors. Is it waking up with the sun shining through your window?
Is it those moments waiting for someone? Is it knowing they really care and forgive your faults, no matter what? Is it the house you grew up in? The house where your children grew up? Is it growing old together?
Holding hands, kissing, the tender moments shared. Halved. Ingrained in your memory. A memory you will never forget. Never forget and always remember.
They will always be there in your heart, in your memories, in the places you shared.
Let them take your breath away and give them your heart openly. Accept there love and cherish every smile, for this is only one life and it’s better together.
Love
Verb
Loves, loving, loved
To have great attachment to and affection for
To have passionate desire, longing and feelings for
To like or desire
To make love to To be in love
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