New Narrative

After the audience feedback of my first rough cut I realised that with out the footage of the young couple the narrative would not make sence and it is hard for the audience to get the concept of the film. I have therefore decided to change the narrative of the film and re write the plot. I want to keep all the edited scenes of the older couple and add in some new footage to make the plot clearer.
My first idea to change the plot is to have the old man sitting in an arm chair and looking at photos of himself and his wife when they were younger. It would zoom in on the photos and then the photos would come to life. The photos would be of the younger couple together and then I'd use photos of older people to show the progression of time.