I have edited the new scene and it works well. It keeps all the elements of romance and fits my genre. I now need to edit the two scenes together and make sure they link and that the audience understands the narrative. I think to do this I will need to film more footage but perhaps use a more synmbolic scene.
I think that for the symbolic scene I will use Gill as the main focus and film her folding paper flowers, representing the flowers Kegan gave her. During editing I will speed this up.
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