Friday, 11 February 2011

Difficulties with new plot

Unfortunately when I wanted to film the new scenes Terry was ill again and I could not ask him to do it. I have now decided to again change the narrative of the film. This time I have decided to film footage of the young couple. I want to show a romantic moment between a young couple. I want Gill to be waiting outside the house, looking like she is getting frustrated waiting for someone. It will then cut to Kegan running up the street to meet her, holding a bunch of flowers. When he gets to Gill he will tap her on the shoulder and then give her the flowers. They would then kiss, so show he is forgiven and add another element of romance.

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