Editing new scene

I have now edited the new symbolic scene with the two scenes of the young and old couple. Instead of using a linear narrative I have interspersed the symbolic scenes within the two narratives as a cut away. The film starts with Gill folding flowers. It then cut to the scene of Gill and Kegan together, a cut away of gill and then it fades to the scene of jean and Terry before finishing with anothe shot of Gill smiling. Although the film feels near completion I still think it needs another scene add more romance. I think it needs to be in a different location and use a different set of characters and show romance in a different situation.